Short Commentary For Poem 3 .

The theme that you are exploring in the poem :

It is how the teacher marks the student's composition, and how angry the teacher got for the student's mistakes. The student eventually got a 'F9', and jumped off a building, 

How you developed the theme in your poem :

I put myself in the student's situation, and how she would feel. 

The effects that you would like to achieve in the poem to impact your readers and how you went about doing it :

I would like my readers to enjoy the poem, but in a short and sweet way. It must also be easy to understand. I made sure that i use simple English that is easy to understand. 

The extent to which you think you have been successful :

although i'm unable to use much of similes and metaphors, but I think that my poem is inspiring.